Well...
It was good for a first, but that's about it. I don't see much depth into the story. The animation could use a lot of work, along with the voiceovers. One thing I didn't like was how it just switched to that "bird's eye view" thing. And the humor was poor. All in all, just keep practicing on Flash, and on the script.
Nice!
Good job with the sprites and the music. Just a lack of violence, though.
Beautiful.
This is the best music video I've seen on NG. Hands down. The flow was really good, and there were some really catchy lines in it. Keep it up, for the love of all that is holy!
Well...
The graphics were good and it was jam packed with violence. Gnarly. It's too short and it seems like a rip of Madness, though.
Great job!
This was a really cool movie. The graphics were good, though it switched from B&W to color, to B&W again. Really, really good Frame by frame animation, and great song. Keep it up.
Pretty good submission.
Graphics- Not the best. Could use some remodeling.
Style- I like how you put the movie together, using the subcaptions between scenes.
Sound- Pretty catchy riff.
Violence is not judged.
Interactivity is not judged.
Humor- Great twists on the plot!
Overall- You know how to put together a good movie. Just work on the graphics and you're set!
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